kse zamany m mny ap k talentd or creatv threads dkhy thy ab nam o nishn n
wow suprb zoi .. bot creative story bnai hai u ne well done yaar .. best ov luck
ASSALAM O ALIKUM
Kya haal hai TM Awam?? Mujhy jo dare mila hai woh yeh hai...
@Bird-Of-Paradise = Bird-Of-Paradise as yew choos this flower then you have to write story on bird bht bari na ho just para
Main ney yeh story likhi hai hopefully sabko pasand ayegi..... kahin se copy paste nahi ki khud likhi hai
Ek Gaon Mai Ek Ustani Ka Ghar Hota Hai Jis K Ghar Gaon K Bachey Parhne Jatey Thy. Ek Raat Woh Ustani So Rahi Hoti Hai Ke EK Dum Us K Kaan K Pas Akar Ek Female Bird Apni Chonch Se Un Ustani Ki Jagati Hai Ustani Gharba Kar Uthti Hain Or Us Bird Ko Window K Pas Jatey Hue Dekhti Hein Or Dekhtin Hain Ke Un K Ghar K Pas Aag Lagi Hui Hai Jo Ahista Ahista Un Ke Ghar Ki Taraf Barh Rahi Hai Woh Foran Apne Husband Ko Jagati Hain Jo Masjid K Imam Sahab Hote Hein Gaon Ke Woh Or Ustani Mil Kar Bahar Jatey Hain Or Aag Ko Barhne Se Roktey Hain Or Bhuja Dete Hain. Subha Jab Logo Ko Maloom Hota Hai Tu Woh Sab Ustani Or Imam Sahab Se Milne Aty Hein. Gaon K Logo K Aney Ki Wajah Se Bacho Ki Parhai Ruk Jati Hai Or Woh Wahin Khail Kood Mai Mashghool Ho Jate Hain Is Doran Ek Bacha Darkht Pe Patang Ko Dekh Kar Darkht Per Chupke Se Char Jata Hai Or Ahista Ahista Darkht K Unchey Hissey Pe Phonch Kar Patang Utarne Lagta Hai Patang Utartey Hue Us Ka Wazan Be Kabo Hota Hai Or Tehni Se Gir Jata Hai Jese Hi Woh Girta Hai Us Ka Sar Dosri Bari Tehani Per Lagta Hai Or Us Ki Shirt Tehni Mai Phans Jati Hai
Woh Bacha Behosh Ek Tehni Mai Phansa Hota Hai. JO K Woh Zada Dair Nahi Reh Pata Or Neechey Gir Jata. Kuch Dair Bad Ek Dodh Wala Apni Cycle Ko Darkht Se Laga Kar Or Khud Bhi Darkht Se Teek Laga Kar Aram Karne K Lia Betha Hai. Tu Mehsos Karta Hai Ke Koi Kankar Bar Bar Us Per Gir Rahey Hain. Woh Jese Hi Upper Dekhta Hai Tu Us Ko Ek Bacha Latka Hua Nazar Ata Hai. Or Woh Kankar Wohi Bird Us Doodh Waley Per Phenk Rahi Thi Bachey Per Tawajah Dalne K Lia. Woh Admi Shor Machata Hai Or Logo Ko Jama Kar K Khud Darkht Per Char Jata Hai Bache Ko Bachane. Or Bachey Ko Hifzat K Sath Neche Lay Ata Hai. Agley Din Skwl Dobara Lagta Hai Sab Bachey Skwl Se Wapis Ja Rahey Hote Hain. Ke Ek Dum Usi Bache Ko Ek Bird Geri Hui Milti Hai. Woh Us Ko Utha Kar Ustani K Pas La Ja Raha Hota Hai. Tu Rastey Mai Imam Sahab Mil Jatey Hain. Or Ustani Bhi Ajati Hain.
Ustani Us Bird Ko Dekh Kar Bolti Hain Yeh Tu Wohi Bird Hai Jis Ne Mujhe Us Rat Jagaya Tha. Imam Sahab Us K Ilaj Kar Rahey Hotey Hain Tu Unhey Maloom Parta Hai Yeh Koi Aam Bird Nahi. Bird K Hosh Mai Ane K Bad Woh Batati Hai Ke Woh Ek Pari Thi Jis Ko Ek Jadugar Ne JADU SE Bird Bana Dia Tha. Or Woh Bird Banne K Bad Bhi Logo Ki Help Karti Thi. Jese Hi Yeh Bat Sab Gaon Waley Logo Ko Pata Chali Tu Sab Us Ko BIRD OF PARADISE Ka Nam Dete Hain. Or Us K Lia Skwl Mai Hi Ek Chota Sa Saya Dar Ghonsla Banaty Hain. Jisey Bacho Ne TM (Tafreeh Mella) House Ka Nam Dey Dia. Q K Woh Bird Help Karne K Ilawa Bachon Ko Maze Mazey Ki Tafreeh Bhi Karwati Thi.
Moral: Agar Ap Mai Dosro Ki Help Ka Jazba Hai Tu ,Kaisi Bhi Sorat Mai Ho Ap Help Zaror Kar Sakte Ho.
Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise
Thank uwow suprb zoi .. bot creative story bnai hai u ne well done yaar .. best ov luck
no need .. u wlcm ..Thank u
walaikum slaam birdy nice thread as well n sahi use kiya har cheeez ka but story too lOng but really impressive
ASSALAM O ALIKUM
Kya haal hai TM Awam?? Mujhy jo dare mila hai woh yeh hai...
@Bird-Of-Paradise = Bird-Of-Paradise as yew choos this flower then you have to write story on bird bht bari na ho just para
Main ney yeh story likhi hai hopefully sabko pasand ayegi..... kahin se copy paste nahi ki khud likhi hai
Ek Gaon Mai Ek Ustani Ka Ghar Hota Hai Jis K Ghar Gaon K Bachey Parhne Jatey Thy. Ek Raat Woh Ustani So Rahi Hoti Hai Ke EK Dum Us K Kaan K Pas Akar Ek Female Bird Apni Chonch Se Un Ustani Ki Jagati Hai Ustani Gharba Kar Uthti Hain Or Us Bird Ko Window K Pas Jatey Hue Dekhti Hein Or Dekhtin Hain Ke Un K Ghar K Pas Aag Lagi Hui Hai Jo Ahista Ahista Un Ke Ghar Ki Taraf Barh Rahi Hai Woh Foran Apne Husband Ko Jagati Hain Jo Masjid K Imam Sahab Hote Hein Gaon Ke Woh Or Ustani Mil Kar Bahar Jatey Hain Or Aag Ko Barhne Se Roktey Hain Or Bhuja Dete Hain. Subha Jab Logo Ko Maloom Hota Hai Tu Woh Sab Ustani Or Imam Sahab Se Milne Aty Hein. Gaon K Logo K Aney Ki Wajah Se Bacho Ki Parhai Ruk Jati Hai Or Woh Wahin Khail Kood Mai Mashghool Ho Jate Hain Is Doran Ek Bacha Darkht Pe Patang Ko Dekh Kar Darkht Per Chupke Se Char Jata Hai Or Ahista Ahista Darkht K Unchey Hissey Pe Phonch Kar Patang Utarne Lagta Hai Patang Utartey Hue Us Ka Wazan Be Kabo Hota Hai Or Tehni Se Gir Jata Hai Jese Hi Woh Girta Hai Us Ka Sar Dosri Bari Tehani Per Lagta Hai Or Us Ki Shirt Tehni Mai Phans Jati Hai
Woh Bacha Behosh Ek Tehni Mai Phansa Hota Hai. JO K Woh Zada Dair Nahi Reh Pata Or Neechey Gir Jata. Kuch Dair Bad Ek Dodh Wala Apni Cycle Ko Darkht Se Laga Kar Or Khud Bhi Darkht Se Teek Laga Kar Aram Karne K Lia Betha Hai. Tu Mehsos Karta Hai Ke Koi Kankar Bar Bar Us Per Gir Rahey Hain. Woh Jese Hi Upper Dekhta Hai Tu Us Ko Ek Bacha Latka Hua Nazar Ata Hai. Or Woh Kankar Wohi Bird Us Doodh Waley Per Phenk Rahi Thi Bachey Per Tawajah Dalne K Lia. Woh Admi Shor Machata Hai Or Logo Ko Jama Kar K Khud Darkht Per Char Jata Hai Bache Ko Bachane. Or Bachey Ko Hifzat K Sath Neche Lay Ata Hai. Agley Din Skwl Dobara Lagta Hai Sab Bachey Skwl Se Wapis Ja Rahey Hote Hain. Ke Ek Dum Usi Bache Ko Ek Bird Geri Hui Milti Hai. Woh Us Ko Utha Kar Ustani K Pas La Ja Raha Hota Hai. Tu Rastey Mai Imam Sahab Mil Jatey Hain. Or Ustani Bhi Ajati Hain.
Ustani Us Bird Ko Dekh Kar Bolti Hain Yeh Tu Wohi Bird Hai Jis Ne Mujhe Us Rat Jagaya Tha. Imam Sahab Us K Ilaj Kar Rahey Hotey Hain Tu Unhey Maloom Parta Hai Yeh Koi Aam Bird Nahi. Bird K Hosh Mai Ane K Bad Woh Batati Hai Ke Woh Ek Pari Thi Jis Ko Ek Jadugar Ne JADU SE Bird Bana Dia Tha. Or Woh Bird Banne K Bad Bhi Logo Ki Help Karti Thi. Jese Hi Yeh Bat Sab Gaon Waley Logo Ko Pata Chali Tu Sab Us Ko BIRD OF PARADISE Ka Nam Dete Hain. Or Us K Lia Skwl Mai Hi Ek Chota Sa Saya Dar Ghonsla Banaty Hain. Jisey Bacho Ne TM (Tafreeh Mella) House Ka Nam Dey Dia. Q K Woh Bird Help Karne K Ilawa Bachon Ko Maze Mazey Ki Tafreeh Bhi Karwati Thi.
Moral: Agar Ap Mai Dosro Ki Help Ka Jazba Hai Tu ,Kaisi Bhi Sorat Mai Ho Ap Help Zaror Kar Sakte Ho.
Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise
asa mumkn h jnb baqoul nimra ahmd k jo khti hn histry repeats itslfhaqhaaa gya waqt phir hath aata nhi
Thank youwalaikum slaam birdy nice thread as well n sahi use kiya har cheeez ka but story too lOng but really impressive
inni serious bat ho ri uh ko khny k pade hui inni mshklo se m serious hwa thaHmm chlain lets c
WS....
ASSALAM O ALIKUM
Kya haal hai TM Awam?? Mujhy jo dare mila hai woh yeh hai...
@Bird-Of-Paradise = Bird-Of-Paradise as yew choos this flower then you have to write story on bird bht bari na ho just para
Main ney yeh story likhi hai hopefully sabko pasand ayegi..... kahin se copy paste nahi ki khud likhi hai
Ek Gaon Mai Ek Ustani Ka Ghar Hota Hai Jis K Ghar Gaon K Bachey Parhne Jatey Thy. Ek Raat Woh Ustani So Rahi Hoti Hai Ke EK Dum Us K Kaan K Pas Akar Ek Female Bird Apni Chonch Se Un Ustani Ki Jagati Hai Ustani Gharba Kar Uthti Hain Or Us Bird Ko Window K Pas Jatey Hue Dekhti Hein Or Dekhtin Hain Ke Un K Ghar K Pas Aag Lagi Hui Hai Jo Ahista Ahista Un Ke Ghar Ki Taraf Barh Rahi Hai Woh Foran Apne Husband Ko Jagati Hain Jo Masjid K Imam Sahab Hote Hein Gaon Ke Woh Or Ustani Mil Kar Bahar Jatey Hain Or Aag Ko Barhne Se Roktey Hain Or Bhuja Dete Hain. Subha Jab Logo Ko Maloom Hota Hai Tu Woh Sab Ustani Or Imam Sahab Se Milne Aty Hein. Gaon K Logo K Aney Ki Wajah Se Bacho Ki Parhai Ruk Jati Hai Or Woh Wahin Khail Kood Mai Mashghool Ho Jate Hain Is Doran Ek Bacha Darkht Pe Patang Ko Dekh Kar Darkht Per Chupke Se Char Jata Hai Or Ahista Ahista Darkht K Unchey Hissey Pe Phonch Kar Patang Utarne Lagta Hai Patang Utartey Hue Us Ka Wazan Be Kabo Hota Hai Or Tehni Se Gir Jata Hai Jese Hi Woh Girta Hai Us Ka Sar Dosri Bari Tehani Per Lagta Hai Or Us Ki Shirt Tehni Mai Phans Jati Hai
Woh Bacha Behosh Ek Tehni Mai Phansa Hota Hai. JO K Woh Zada Dair Nahi Reh Pata Or Neechey Gir Jata. Kuch Dair Bad Ek Dodh Wala Apni Cycle Ko Darkht Se Laga Kar Or Khud Bhi Darkht Se Teek Laga Kar Aram Karne K Lia Betha Hai. Tu Mehsos Karta Hai Ke Koi Kankar Bar Bar Us Per Gir Rahey Hain. Woh Jese Hi Upper Dekhta Hai Tu Us Ko Ek Bacha Latka Hua Nazar Ata Hai. Or Woh Kankar Wohi Bird Us Doodh Waley Per Phenk Rahi Thi Bachey Per Tawajah Dalne K Lia. Woh Admi Shor Machata Hai Or Logo Ko Jama Kar K Khud Darkht Per Char Jata Hai Bache Ko Bachane. Or Bachey Ko Hifzat K Sath Neche Lay Ata Hai. Agley Din Skwl Dobara Lagta Hai Sab Bachey Skwl Se Wapis Ja Rahey Hote Hain. Ke Ek Dum Usi Bache Ko Ek Bird Geri Hui Milti Hai. Woh Us Ko Utha Kar Ustani K Pas La Ja Raha Hota Hai. Tu Rastey Mai Imam Sahab Mil Jatey Hain. Or Ustani Bhi Ajati Hain.
Ustani Us Bird Ko Dekh Kar Bolti Hain Yeh Tu Wohi Bird Hai Jis Ne Mujhe Us Rat Jagaya Tha. Imam Sahab Us K Ilaj Kar Rahey Hotey Hain Tu Unhey Maloom Parta Hai Yeh Koi Aam Bird Nahi. Bird K Hosh Mai Ane K Bad Woh Batati Hai Ke Woh Ek Pari Thi Jis Ko Ek Jadugar Ne JADU SE Bird Bana Dia Tha. Or Woh Bird Banne K Bad Bhi Logo Ki Help Karti Thi. Jese Hi Yeh Bat Sab Gaon Waley Logo Ko Pata Chali Tu Sab Us Ko BIRD OF PARADISE Ka Nam Dete Hain. Or Us K Lia Skwl Mai Hi Ek Chota Sa Saya Dar Ghonsla Banaty Hain. Jisey Bacho Ne TM (Tafreeh Mella) House Ka Nam Dey Dia. Q K Woh Bird Help Karne K Ilawa Bachon Ko Maze Mazey Ki Tafreeh Bhi Karwati Thi.
Moral: Agar Ap Mai Dosro Ki Help Ka Jazba Hai Tu ,Kaisi Bhi Sorat Mai Ho Ap Help Zaror Kar Sakte Ho.
Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise
very very nice bohat acha likha hy ap ny
ASSALAM O ALIKUM
Kya haal hai TM Awam?? Mujhy jo dare mila hai woh yeh hai...
@Bird-Of-Paradise = Bird-Of-Paradise as yew choos this flower then you have to write story on bird bht bari na ho just para
Main ney yeh story likhi hai hopefully sabko pasand ayegi..... kahin se copy paste nahi ki khud likhi hai
Ek Gaon Mai Ek Ustani Ka Ghar Hota Hai Jis K Ghar Gaon K Bachey Parhne Jatey Thy. Ek Raat Woh Ustani So Rahi Hoti Hai Ke EK Dum Us K Kaan K Pas Akar Ek Female Bird Apni Chonch Se Un Ustani Ki Jagati Hai Ustani Gharba Kar Uthti Hain Or Us Bird Ko Window K Pas Jatey Hue Dekhti Hein Or Dekhtin Hain Ke Un K Ghar K Pas Aag Lagi Hui Hai Jo Ahista Ahista Un Ke Ghar Ki Taraf Barh Rahi Hai Woh Foran Apne Husband Ko Jagati Hain Jo Masjid K Imam Sahab Hote Hein Gaon Ke Woh Or Ustani Mil Kar Bahar Jatey Hain Or Aag Ko Barhne Se Roktey Hain Or Bhuja Dete Hain. Subha Jab Logo Ko Maloom Hota Hai Tu Woh Sab Ustani Or Imam Sahab Se Milne Aty Hein. Gaon K Logo K Aney Ki Wajah Se Bacho Ki Parhai Ruk Jati Hai Or Woh Wahin Khail Kood Mai Mashghool Ho Jate Hain Is Doran Ek Bacha Darkht Pe Patang Ko Dekh Kar Darkht Per Chupke Se Char Jata Hai Or Ahista Ahista Darkht K Unchey Hissey Pe Phonch Kar Patang Utarne Lagta Hai Patang Utartey Hue Us Ka Wazan Be Kabo Hota Hai Or Tehni Se Gir Jata Hai Jese Hi Woh Girta Hai Us Ka Sar Dosri Bari Tehani Per Lagta Hai Or Us Ki Shirt Tehni Mai Phans Jati Hai
Woh Bacha Behosh Ek Tehni Mai Phansa Hota Hai. JO K Woh Zada Dair Nahi Reh Pata Or Neechey Gir Jata. Kuch Dair Bad Ek Dodh Wala Apni Cycle Ko Darkht Se Laga Kar Or Khud Bhi Darkht Se Teek Laga Kar Aram Karne K Lia Betha Hai. Tu Mehsos Karta Hai Ke Koi Kankar Bar Bar Us Per Gir Rahey Hain. Woh Jese Hi Upper Dekhta Hai Tu Us Ko Ek Bacha Latka Hua Nazar Ata Hai. Or Woh Kankar Wohi Bird Us Doodh Waley Per Phenk Rahi Thi Bachey Per Tawajah Dalne K Lia. Woh Admi Shor Machata Hai Or Logo Ko Jama Kar K Khud Darkht Per Char Jata Hai Bache Ko Bachane. Or Bachey Ko Hifzat K Sath Neche Lay Ata Hai. Agley Din Skwl Dobara Lagta Hai Sab Bachey Skwl Se Wapis Ja Rahey Hote Hain. Ke Ek Dum Usi Bache Ko Ek Bird Geri Hui Milti Hai. Woh Us Ko Utha Kar Ustani K Pas La Ja Raha Hota Hai. Tu Rastey Mai Imam Sahab Mil Jatey Hain. Or Ustani Bhi Ajati Hain.
Ustani Us Bird Ko Dekh Kar Bolti Hain Yeh Tu Wohi Bird Hai Jis Ne Mujhe Us Rat Jagaya Tha. Imam Sahab Us K Ilaj Kar Rahey Hotey Hain Tu Unhey Maloom Parta Hai Yeh Koi Aam Bird Nahi. Bird K Hosh Mai Ane K Bad Woh Batati Hai Ke Woh Ek Pari Thi Jis Ko Ek Jadugar Ne JADU SE Bird Bana Dia Tha. Or Woh Bird Banne K Bad Bhi Logo Ki Help Karti Thi. Jese Hi Yeh Bat Sab Gaon Waley Logo Ko Pata Chali Tu Sab Us Ko BIRD OF PARADISE Ka Nam Dete Hain. Or Us K Lia Skwl Mai Hi Ek Chota Sa Saya Dar Ghonsla Banaty Hain. Jisey Bacho Ne TM (Tafreeh Mella) House Ka Nam Dey Dia. Q K Woh Bird Help Karne K Ilawa Bachon Ko Maze Mazey Ki Tafreeh Bhi Karwati Thi.
Moral: Agar Ap Mai Dosro Ki Help Ka Jazba Hai Tu ,Kaisi Bhi Sorat Mai Ho Ap Help Zaror Kar Sakte Ho.
Regards
Bird-Of-Paradise
JazakAllahvery very nice bohat acha likha hy ap ny
ALLAH ham sab logo k dilo main ais tarha ka jazbha pedha kary .............
JazakAllah broWS....
awesum yaar!!!! u tu chaah gae... bht hi achi likhi hey.... last mey jis tarah is kahani ko picture di he... waqae bilkul fit aarahi hey.... welldone MASHA'ALLAAH
u ka way bht pasand aya...
hahahaha JazakAllahMasha Allah buhut pyaara likha hai aap ne
parh ka maza aagia .................... Bird of Paradise ne Help ki story share ka ke hamain bhi garma dia hai
jeeti raho
Well Done