Barsson Baad Kyun Aaa Gayi Phir Yaad Teri

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saviou

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Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb :)

doston ek baar phir apne toote phoote kalaam ke sath ham hazir hain

ye poetry hamne contest ke liye likhe the jo anaaya ne start kiya tha topic tha yaad lekin ham waqt par post nahi karsake the lekin baat sirf contest ki nahi balke isme likhe hamare khayalat ki aur kuch haqeeqat numa kahani ki hai to isliye aap sab ke sath yahan share kar rahe hain

aur sath me Sabah jinhone isko design kiya hai unka bhi bohot shukriya jab bhi ham unse design ka ya phir kisi bhi help ke liye kehte hain to wo besakhta haan kardeti hain :)

umeed hai ap sab ko pasand aayagi hamari ye koshish :)



Barsson Baad Kyun Aaa Gayi Phir Yaad Teri
Mehfil Mein Tanha Kar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri

Dil Dhadka Kar Dil Dehlaa Kar Bechaain Kar
Seene Mein Aag Laga Kar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri

Saare Manzar Hain Ab Meri Aankhon Ke Samne
Uff Ye Kaisa Dard Jaga Kar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri

Na Socha Tha Phir Honge Aise Manzarr Ronuma
Chalti Sanson Ko Thama Kar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri

Woh Haseen Lamhein Woh Beete Huye Pal Haye
Aankhon Se Ashk Baha Kar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri

Kaise sambhalun Khud Ko Kise Sunao Dastan apni
Zubaan Ko Merii Qaid Kar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri

Qalam Uthaya Hai Aaj Maine Likhne Kahani Wohi
Jo Na Kehsaki Zuban Wo LikhaKar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri
Yaqeenan Na Lautega Wo Guzraa Hua ZamaanaNasir
Tu Likhta Reh Jayega Ye Kya Kar Gayi Phir Yaad Teri
 

*Sonu*

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walikum salam
:)
masha'Allah beautifully written bhai
:)
bht hi umda likha hai app na
{(ok)}
keep it up
:-bd
 

*Sonu*

•°o.O Born to Fly O.o°•
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sabah sis na bht hi achy sa isy design kiya it looks so decent
:)
 

Sabah

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Walaikum Salam Wrwb!
aapke poetry to MashAllah buhut ache hain, :)
aur yeh Humare liye ek Honour ki baat hain k aapke Poems Hum Design kerte hain :) but sorry kabhi kabhi zyada time lete hain Designing mei its just because of searching a suitable Image and kabhi lights Problem.
aap aur aise ache ache poems likhte rahe InshAllah future k ek buhut ache poet rahoge aap :)
 

HuriYa

(¯`★´¯)I'll Always Be Daddy's Doll(¯´★`¯)
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D!amOnd CastLe
Wah bOhat KhOob..! {(dancing)}

pOetry ki zuban main apni Feelings ka Izhaar kErna Khasa Mushkil hay cuz Is main Alfaz ka chunaO aur tasalsul Barqarar rakhna hi shairy ko Khobsurat banata hay. aur Aap ki pOetry pErh ker yah dOno Cheezain hi NazEr ati hain.

Aap tu bOhat Acha Likhtay hain Mashallah..! {(baby})

Aur Sabah sis nay bhE bOhat Acha DesIgn kia hay..! Lukin vEry nIce. :)

kEEp up thE gOod work..! {(popcorn)}
 

Raat ki Rani

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Walaikum salam Wrwb
wah wah n wah dair aalaa n Beautiful poetry :-bd
n also Beautiful designing by sabah sis:)
Thanks for sharing with us...
 

Qawareer

میرا خدا ہر روز مجھے نئی خوشیاں دیتا ہے
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wssalam u alaikum wrwb
mashaAllah..
boht umdah...:-bd
likhte rahen..:)

aur boht khoobsorat design kia hai sabah siso:-bd
 

Khwahish

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Mashallah bohot khob
bohot hi acha lekha hai aap ni Saviou bhai
Keep it up
and nice designing sabah sis

 

Toobi

dhondo gy molko molko milnay k nae,nayab hum..
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wah bht khoob nasir bhaya bht khoob....very nice....ap apni book kub shaya karahay hay???????
 
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