Ek baar Phir Hazir e Khidmat :p

[mirza37]

Umda shairing ,,

 

[*Sonu*]

walikum salam

masha'Allah superb bro

keep it up
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[Hoorain]

ahan nice

 

[Qawareer]

wssalam u alaikum
wah.. boht khoob...
is poetry me to sana udas c larki lg rahi hai..main to unhe boht zinda dil aur shokh c larki smjhati hon.

 

[saviou]

wssalam u alaikum
wah.. boht khoob...
is poetry me to sana udas c larki lg rahi hai..main to unhe boht zinda dil aur shokh c larki smjhati hon.

hmm jee sahi kaha apne
aur ye zaroori bhi nahi ke jaise hame nazar aate ho wo haqeeqat me bhi aise hi hon
baki isme hamne kitna unke bare me sahi guess kiye hain wo to apko sana hi bata sakte hain

 

[Qawareer]

hmm jee sahi kaha apne
aur ye zaroori bhi nahi ke jaise hame nazar aate ho wo haqeeqat me bhi aise hi hon
baki isme hamne kitna unke bare me sahi guess kiye hain wo to apko sana hi bata sakte hain

han g..ye b hota hai..
sabhi log jese nazr aate hain andr se us se different b hote hain..

 

[saviou]

han g..ye b hota hai..
sabhi log jese nazr aate hain andr se us se different b hote hain..

jee jee
aur apki siggy masha Allah bohot achi hai

 

[Qawareer]

jee jee
aur apki siggy masha Allah bohot achi hai

shukaria..
Allama iqbal ka shair hai..

 

[saviou]

shukaria..
Allama iqbal ka shair hai..

jee jee pata hai
aur ham bhi unke ek share se apni siggy tayyar karwa rahe hain

 

[Qawareer]

hmm acha..wah..

 

[saviou]

hmm acha..wah..

ye apka avtar me kya hai aur kyun apne rakha kya ham jaansakte hain ?

 

[Qawareer]

han..ji..
jo muje smjh aayi is ki woh bata deti hon.
ye avi haya aur parde ko show karti hai..flower khoobsorati ko aur ye lock haya ko..
aur thori afsanwi aur different si b lgti hai..is liye lagai

 

[saviou]

han..ji..
jo muje smjh aayi is ki woh bata deti hon.
ye avi haya aur parde ko show karti hai..flower khoobsorati ko aur ye lock haya ko..
aur thori afsanwi aur different si b lgti hai..is liye lagai

masha Allah

 

[Habeel]

​bohat khub Nasir bhai kya bat hai ap ki

 

[Amreen]

Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb

doston kaise hian aap sab inshaAllah theek honge
ye nazm hamne ek saal pehle contest k liye likhe the lekin wo contest ka kuch result aaya hi nahi
bahre haal is contest me hissa lene aur poetry likhne k liye hame sana ne kaafi huasla diya tha aur hamne unhi k liye ye nazm bhi likhe the aur unhi ko dedicate bhi kiye the

to phir se apke samne ye nazm hazir e khidmat hai

http://www.tafrehmela.com/tms-contest/130513-your-own-poetry-contest-3.html

Ankhon me kayi khwahishen kayi khwabon ko sameti hai wo
Har Nayee subah nayee hasraten leke uthti hai wo

Apni hi duniya me gumsum khoyee rehti hai
kabhi hasti to kabhi roti to kabhi khush hoti hai wo

dekh kar isko har koi deewana war kehta hai
mere khwabon mere khayalon ki tabeer hai wo

Sheeshe ka dil liye in pattharon ki basti me
Har ek ka zakhm liye chup chaap sehti hai wo

Na kisi ka dard kisi k liye na kisi k liye hai pyar yahan
Deta har koi zakhmon pe zakhm har ek ka tuta sansar yahan

Har koi yahan deta hai yahan taleem e masawat
Hain insano ki shakl me darinde sare,har koi khonkhwar yahan

Na bachon pe shafaqqat na badon ki izzat
Taalim to aala hai lekin aqlaq kahan

Iss bharii duniya me sab paraye hain yahan
Na mera hai koi yehi kehti hai wo

Is basti se door khawabaon ki nagri me
Khwahishon ke shajr tale, Hasraton ke bagiche me

Kisi Ajnabi k intezar mein hai wo umeedwaar
Jo kare khushion ki barsat jo de dher sara pyar

Nasir duago hai uski hasrat ho puri khwab hon sache
Mile jahan ki har khushi jiski taalib hai wo

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dil ko choo gai aapki poetry nasir bhai...alfaz hi nahi mere pas tareef ke liye...

 

[saviou]

dil ko choo gai aapki poetry nasir bhai...alfaz hi nahi mere pas tareef ke liye...

bohot bohot shukriya mohtarma
apko pasand aayi yehi hamare liye bohot hai

 

[saviou]

walaikum assalam
MASHALLAH savior bhai, aap k qalam main tou jaadoo hai bohat acchi poem likhi hai

shukran behna
lekin ye jaadoo wali baat apko kaise pata chali ?
kisi ko batana nahi

 

[Nelly]

hehe ok

 

[fiza.saeed]

very nice sharing..

 

[-Mahi-]

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