My First Poetry

[Jahil]

thank you frndzz lekin yeh to boht pehle likhi thi yr isliye thori lambi b hai lekin jo poetries ab likhta hon woh to itni choti hone ke bawajod b itni touching hoti hain kisi din moqa mila to share krunga ok

 

[Sabah]

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Main Ab Bhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Or Sab Se Larta Rehta Hun​

Tumhari Sab Baaton Ke Badle​

Main Sab Se Leta Phirta Hun​

Tum Ne To Chun Lya Apna Sathi​

Main Ab Bhi Tanha Rehta Hun​

Main Ab Bhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Or Sab Se Larta Rehta Hun​

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Tumhe Yaad Hai Woh Peepal Ka Darakht?​

Jis Ki Sab Se Onchi Shaakh Per​

June Ki Tapti Dhoop Main​

Maine Naam Tumhara Likha Tha​

Or Shaam Ke Thande Saaye Main​

Tumhe Haath Pakar Ker Laya Tha​

Tumko Woh Naam Dikhaya Tha​

Jisse Dekh Ker Tum Muskurayin Thi​

Or Suraj Ki Woh Kirnen Jo​

Patton Ko Cheer Ke Ayin Thi​

Tumhari Muskarahat Ke Sang​

Kitne Hi Rang Woh Layin Thi​

Main Bhool Chuka Hon Baten Sab​

Yaadon Main Guzaari Raaten Sab​

Per Ab Bhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Woh Chehra Bhool Nahi Pata Hun​

Or Sab Se Larta Rehta Hun​

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Ab Tum Bhi Nahi Woh Waqt Bhi Nahi​

Per Naam Abhi Bhi Zinda Hai​

Jo Ussi Shaakh Pe Likha Hai​

Or Mujhko Moun Chirata Hai​

Tumhari Yaad Dilata Hai​

Main Chahta Hun Ab Usse Mitana​

Tumhari Sab Yaadon Ko Bhulana​

Pehle Chota Tha To Darakht Per Charh Jata Tha​

Magar Ab Bara Hun To Haath Nahi Jaata​

Main Abhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Khud Se Bhi Larta Rehta Hun​

Ab Bhi Kisi Se Banti Nahi​

Main Tanha Tanha Phirta Hun​

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Or Bachon Ke Woh Risalen Jo​

Parhne Ko Tumse Leta Tha​

Lekin La Parwahi Ke Ba'as​

Saare Hi Kho Deta Tha​

Phir Jab Wapis Lene Tum Ati Thi​

Koi Ek Bhi Dhond Na Pati Thi​

Phir Kitna Mujhse Larti Thi​

Pehro Naraz Rehti Thi​

Tum Khud Bhi To Kitni Bholi Thi​

Jald Hi Sab Bhool Jati Thi​

Phir Jab Naye Risalen Lati Thi​

Or Mujhko Batlati Thi​

Phir Mere Mangne Per Mujhko​

Foren Hi De Jati Thi​

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Main Ab Bhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Or Wesa Hi La Parwah Hun​

Sab Cheezen Kho Deta Hun​

Per Woh Risalen Baqi Hain​

Jo Bohot Qarine Se Rakhe Hain​

Tumhari Yaad Dilate Hain​

Or Mujhko Yeh Samjhate Hain​

Main Ab Bhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Or Sab Se Larta Rehta Hun​

Or Lar Lar Kar Jab Thak Jata Hun​

To Chupke Se Tanhayi Main​

Un Risalon Ko Parh Leta Hun​

Un Main Hai Basi Khushbo Tumhari​

Main Lams Tumhara Chohta Hun​

Or Do Aanso Gira Deta Hun​

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Main Ab Bhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Or Ab Bhi Boht Khush Rehta Hun​

Hansta Hun Or Hansata Hun​

Per Ankhon Main Jo Nami Hai Tehri​

Usko Nahi Chupa Pata Hun​

Mujhe Parhne Wale Pochte Hain​

Kabhi Sanjidah Bhi Hote Ho?​

Mujhe Dekhne Wale Kehte Hain​

Hamesha Sanjidah Hi Kyun Rehte Ho​

Main Abhi Chota Bacha Hun​

Duhri Shaksiyat Main Jeeta Hun​

Or Sab Se Larta Rehta Hun..​

Hmmmm well kia kahu aap tu wakiye chupay rustam neklay Fahad, truly this poetry made me sad, jho poetries aapko ek imaginary world mei lekhe jaye jeska concept buhut clear ho aise poem buhut kum hote hain aur aapke poem wakiye aisa hain, mujhay koi hairangi nai hai k aapne yeh beautiful poem likhe hain kio k jes den aapke sane replies islamic thread mei dekhe and padhe tabhe andaza hua es duffer k piche ek buhut he genius banda chupa hain and that's what you are, your poetry is brilliant. May you have a happy and a blessful life ahead. Ameen

 

[Jahil]

thank you sabahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh for ur preciouse words

 

[gulfishan]

wah wah wah tm bhi poetryyyyyyyyy likhteeeeeeeee ho chotey bacheyyyyy awsmmmmmmm poetryyy[DOUBLEPOST=1351270502][/DOUBLEPOST]Per Ankhon Main Jo Nami Hai Tehri
Usko Nahi Chupa Pata Hun wah wah

 

[Jahil]

thank you princessssss

 

[ShyPrincess]

Niceee attempt *thumbsup*

 

[FallenAngeL]

bht khoooob ..
zaabrdast

 

[Jahil]

thank you princess and angel

 

[Nadaan_Shazie]

nyccc......

 

[pattielynn]

niceee...bohat ache hainn....

 

[Jahil]

thank u rockerssssssssssssss

 

[kiranshah]

hmm nyce one

 

[Jahil]

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[kiranshah]

ye wali mai parh chuki ho achi likhi hai bohut

 

[Jahil]

ohh han chalo koi bat nhi bs ek akhri or parh lo jo link di thi maine ok nd thanksss

 

[Blue_Sky]

Very nice

 

[R0cker]

great

 

[AnadiL]

@Duffer nicee

 

[فہد]

itne purane purane threads open kro gi ab?

 

[Ocean-of-love]

Fabulous