Taqdeer Me Likha Barhaq Hai Ye Juz e Imaan Hai

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saviou

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doston yahan ham teen zaviye se taqdeer ko pesh kar rahe hain....jisme ek mehboob k na milne ka gham hai aur ek jahiliyat par jo khwabon ki taabeer me apni sonch ko dalkar khud pareshan rehte hain aur akhri jo ham beech me rakhenge wo tauheed par hai jo hamne khud likhi hai.....hope k aap ko pasand aayega...........{(popcorn)}




Intekhab na bhi kertay;
Usko to dil mein utrna he tha.
Taqdeer mein uska milan na sahi;
Bicharna tu likha tha................







Taqdeer Me Likha Barhaq Hai Ye Juz e Imaan Hai
Mukrega isse to Hoga bura tera ajnaam hai

Tere rabne tujhpe zulm nahi kiya Wo To Rahman Hai
Nasamajh usne wohi likha jo tune kiya Ye Tera Imtehan Hai

Dikha Ke Rahe Haq Usne Diya Tujhe Ikhtiyar Hai
Apne Amal Se Tune Khud Banayi Apni Taqdeer Hai


Ye Sifat e Momin Hai Gaib Par Lana Imaan Nasir
Ye Alamat Bhi Hai Ke Tere Achchi Taqdeer Hai







Khwab ko heela bna kar ikk ghlat tabeer ka
loog rona ro rahe hein aaj tak taqdeer ka
 

saviou

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Jazakallah khair bro.........bohot bohot shukriya
ek choti si koshish ki hamne taqdeer par kuch likhne ki
apko pasand aaya shukriya


Ye Sifat e Momin Hai Gaib Par Lana Imaan Nasir

Ye Alamat Bhi Hai Ke Tere Achchi Taqdeer Hai

very nice brother.......


thanks for gud sharing.
 
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Mashallah buhut he achi nazm bnaye hain aapne saviou
I really like it...
aapke jitne bhi nazm read ki humne sub he behtereen hain
aapne huner ko zaya na kare balke aur bhi aise he ache nazim likhte rahe..
keep it up...
thanks...
 
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saviou

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bohot bohot shurkiya sabah.......{(popcorn)}
aapki comments se hame aur bhi hausla milta hai....
aur apse umeed bhi hai k aap ka sath aage bhi aise hi rahega insha Allah
Jazakallah khair


Mashallah buhut he achi nazm bnaye hain aapne saviou
I really like it...
aapke jitne bhi nazm read ki humne sub he behtereen hain
aapne huner ko zaya na kare balke aur bhi aise he ache nazim likhte rahe..
keep it up...
thanks...
 
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saviou

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bohot bohot shukriya Diya.....is nazm ko pasand karne k liye isme hame bhi ye do line bohot pasand hain jab ye nazm hamne mukammal ki to ye do line padhke bohot achcha laga.........

Jazakallah khair


Tere rabne tujhpe zulm nahi kiya Wo To Rahman Hai
Nasamajh usne wohi likha jo tune kiya Ye Tera Imtehan Hai


very nyc sharing saviou.! i really liked it!
 

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mashALLAH ..ek dum sahi likha bro...
hr sher bahut acha hy

Intekhab na bhi kertay;
Usko to dil mein utrna he tha.
Taqdeer mein uska milan na sahi;
Bicharna tu likha tha................


Khwab ko heela bna kar ikk ghlat tabeer ka

loog rona ro rahe hein aaj tak taqdeer ka
 

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wssalam u alaikum
mashaAllah..bhai soch boht umdah hai...:-bd

Taqdeer Me Likha Barhaq Hai Ye Juz e Imaan Hai
Mukrega isse to Hoga bura tera ajnaam hai
bhai is shair k dosre misre me hoga aur hai dono ikathe aa gaye hain..wazn barqaqar nhi raha..
agar esa hota to shyd zyda manasab rehta..

Taqdeer Me Likha Barhaq Hai Ye Juz e Imaan Hai
Mukrega isse to phir bura tera ajnaam hai


 
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saviou

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wssalam u alaikum
mashaAllah..bhai soch boht umdah hai...:-bd

Taqdeer Me Likha Barhaq Hai Ye Juz e Imaan Hai
Mukrega isse to Hoga bura tera ajnaam hai
bhai is shair k dosre misre me hoga aur hai dono ikathe aa gaye hain..wazn barqaqar nhi raha..
agar esa hota to shyd zyda manasab rehta..

Taqdeer Me Likha Barhaq Hai Ye Juz e Imaan Hai
Mukrega isse to phir bura tera ajnaam hai



jee jee bilkul :)
asal me ye pehli pehli baar jab likhna shuru kare the tab ke ashaar hain
inshAllah phir se isko nayi shakal dene ki koshish karenge
 

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A n3st!
waalaikum assalam

Ahaaan MASHA ALLAH very true :-bd

Khwab ko heela bna kar ikk ghlat tabeer ka
loog rona ro rahe hein aaj tak taqdeer ka
 

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g...esa hota hai bhai:)
 
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