Wohi Sawan Hai Wohi Angan Hai Par Tu Nahi

[saviou]

Affwannn mohtarma

 

[SHB_Bhaiya]

Poertry kamal ki hai

Per design kuch khaas nahi plzzz such me is se acha hona chahiye tha....

 

[Rubi]

walaikumsalam bro...
wow..bahut achi poetry kri hy bro...MASHALLAH

 

[saviou]

very nice....

shukran zeri

 

[jazzmish]

wohoooooooo superb nyccccccccccccccccccccc.......................................

 

[jazzmish]

maShaa Allah buhut aChi Sharing ki hai brO aap nay
humay bhi Shaiyari karna Sekhayeh na​

ku noori tm ny kia krni ha

 

[saviou]

ku noori tm ny kia krni ha

ye konsi language hai

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Wa'alaikum assalam
Nasir bhai bohot hi umdaah ghazal hai
dil chhoo gaiy aap ki ghazal to

 

[Dawn]

mashaAllah mohtaram badi umda poetry likhi aapne.
wahi sawan wahi aangan par tu nahi.
kia baat hai.

 

[Zee Leo]

This one is better ..

 

[Nelly]

walaikum assalam
umda sharing bro mazeed likhte rahen INSHALLAH​

 

[mind]

nice poetry

 

[Qawareer]

wssalam u alikum
mashaAllah..boht khoob..
Sawan aur mehboob ki judai..
boht acha likha..

 

[Hoorain]

bohat khoob bohat hi zabardast MASHAALLAH

btaun kaise usko kitna bechain hoon main yahan
wo bhi sch rhi hogi sunaun ye baat par tu nhi

ye thora confusing nhi ho gya

ab yahan Wo bhi soch rhi hogi koi 3rd person lagging n us k baad par tu nhi

 

[Qawareer]

design boht achi huvi hai..
ye jo pic me barish ho rhi hai..achi lg rahi hai..

 

[*Sonu*]

walikum salam

masha'Allah bht hi acha likha hai bhai
​

 

[Asma24]

walekum assalam....bht achi poetry hy


specialy this line


taras rahi hain meri aankhen najane kyun
tujhe dekhne ki arzoo hy shayed per tu nahi hy

 

[Amreen]

Assalamu Alaykum Wrwb
doston ham phir se hazir hain toote phote kalaam ke sath
ye poetry hamne contest k liye likhe hian umeed karte hain apko pasand aayegi inshaAllah

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bohat hi dil sos poetry hai nasir bhai aur aapke hasb e hal bhi hai...
isi liye to kaha jata hai ke shayri sach bolti hai...

 

[saviou]

bohat khoob bohat hi zabardast MASHAALLAH

btaun kaise usko kitna bechain hoon main yahan
wo bhi sch rhi hogi sunaun ye baat par tu nhi

ye thora confusing nhi ho gya

ab yahan Wo bhi soch rhi hogi koi 3rd person lagging n us k baad par tu nhi

matlab wo bhi aise hi soch rahi hogi ke main bhi bechain hun par tu nahi
isme confussion kahan hai

aur bohot shukriya pasand karne k liye
lekin is baar ki poetries me sab confuse kyun hogaye hain
ab aap sab ki confusion par ek poetry likhni hogi

 

[saviou]

bohat hi dil sos poetry hai nasir bhai aur aapke hasb e hal bhi hai...
isi liye to kaha jata hai ke shayri sach bolti hai...

jee jee sahi kaha apne
ab hal e dil ayaan na ho to likh dena parhta hai