baja fermaya fehmida sis..jis tan lagy oohii janay..Jin pay guzarti hay wohi jantay hain............ye durd kia hota hay.........bohat umdagi say likha hay.........excellent write up....keep it up
{(thanz)} sisthanks for nyc sharing
aap ki amad ka shukriasub sad sad k rona ro rahay hy, tu itni sad stroy per ker sad honay k kiya fayeda
is liye ma nay faisal kiya hay k ma read ha nakro, bad fir sad rehna paray gay
bht shukria Saviou Brobohot acha likha hai apne
aur haqeeqat ke kareeb
Allah hamare halat durst kare Aameen
{(thanz)} brovery beautiful return
{(thanz)}Nice sharing...Aur buht sad kahani hai ... Waqi is tarha he hu raha hai aaj kal....
{(thanz)}beautiful sharing anju
Mafi chahaTi hon amreen sis aap sad hoi ... Bht shukRiya tym nikalnay k liye.bohat hi udas kar diya is story ne....bohat khoobsoorati se likha hai aapne...Keep it up...
ok bromain sakoon se parh ke comments donga {(oh0(}
Assalam o alaikum
bohot hi badhiya likha hai aap ne siso is hi tarah likhte rahiye
Oh sad story ,, nice sharings
{(thanz)} so muchhmm sad story
bohat ache se likha aap ne
{(thanz)}shoomuch sisvery beautifully written it is sad also aur reality k pass coz aaj kal hamare mulk main halaat hi ese hain k ye sab patah nai kitni larkion, maon, behnon ko face karna parta ho ga k unhain khabar mile un ka bhai, shohar, beta be gunayi main dehshat gardi ki bheent char gaya
keep writing sis, bohat taseer hai aap k alfaz aur andaaz-e-bayaan main