Assalaamu alaikum TM doston haazir hoon eik ghazal ke saath
phir se wahi puraani umeed ke subko INSHA'ALLAH pasand aayegi
wahi puraana ChiragH wahi puraani ibtida lekin INSHA'ALLAH
ghazal mein aap subko kuch naya parhne ko milega is dafa mene
eik naye andaaz me likhne ki koshish ki hai
Jo bhulaye zikr tera wo khushi nahin chahiyejo shumar ho ghibat me wo hansi nahin chahiyeho jis mein mujh se tere hukm ki nafarmaaniya RAB ChiragH ko waisi zindagi nahin chahiyekar sake gumraah mujhe koi deen e MOHAMMADI semujhe is qism ki aye KHUDA saadgi nahin chahiyekar sake mujh se naraz mere pyaare KHUDA komujhe qaabil e gustaakh deed hi nahin chahiyeishq hai mujhe Rasool a.s se per jahil nahin meae RAB tere siwa kisi ki bandagi nahin chahiyetu awwal tu aakhir tu raheem kareem tu aadil totere siwa kisi ki mujhe mohtaji bhi nahin chahiye***S_ChiragH***
thanks duffer bhai[DOUBLEPOST=1351582565][/DOUBLEPOST]Gar na ho suurat to seerat hi sahi,hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm nicee poetry
Bohot bohot shukria Bela sisohmmm 2nd last shair bht khubsurat or mukamal ha......
bht khubsurat likha bhaiya
Bohot bohot shukria bhai jan hummmmWahhhhh dil jeet liya saif aapne is poetry se mera....
Wah wah bohot hi khoobsurat saif..
wazan kaafi acha hai aapke ashaar ka aur isme continuity aur achi hojae to mazaa ajaega..
Waise bohot hi mature shayari hai awsome, ALLAH hame amal ki taufeeq de Ameen..
Hummm theek hai bhai mein sms bhejunga aapke paas INSHA'ALLAH .[DOUBLEPOST=1351588227][/DOUBLEPOST]Mjhay Pm nahn krnay ata. . . .?[DOUBLEPOST=1351539113][/DOUBLEPOST]O3O3 3777232 my numbr
Hummmmmmmmmmmm thanks brohmmmmmmmmmmmmmm nicee poetry
Shukria shukria Sona sisomasha'Allah bht hi acha likha hai apna bro
bohot he zabardast likha hai Ma sha Allah... Allah hum subko marte dum tak in baaton pe qaim o daa'im rakhe aafiat k sath aameenAssalaamu alaikum TM doston haazir hoon eik ghazal ke saath
phir se wahi puraani umeed ke subko INSHA'ALLAH pasand aayegi
wahi puraana ChiragH wahi puraani ibtida lekin INSHA'ALLAH
ghazal mein aap subko kuch naya parhne ko milega is dafa mene
eik naye andaaz me likhne ki koshish ki hai
Jo bhulaye zikr tera wo khushi nahin chahiyejo shumar ho ghibat me wo hansi nahin chahiyeho jis mein mujh se tere hukm ki nafarmaaniya RAB ChiragH ko waisi zindagi nahin chahiyekar sake gumraah mujhe koi deen e MOHAMMADI semujhe is qism ki aye KHUDA saadgi nahin chahiyekar sake mujh se naraz mere pyaare KHUDA komujhe qaabil e gustaakh deed hi nahin chahiyeishq hai mujhe Rasool a.s se per jahil nahin meae RAB tere siwa kisi ki bandagi nahin chahiyetu awwal tu aakhir tu raheem kareem tu aadil totere siwa kisi ki mujhe mohtaji bhi nahin chahiye***S_ChiragH***
Bohot bohot shukria bhai... Aameen Thumma aameen .bohot he zabardast likha hai Ma sha Allah... Allah hum subko marte dum tak in baaton pe qaim o daa'im rakhe aafiat k sath aameen
walaikum salamAssalaamu alaikum TM doston haazir hoon eik ghazal ke saath
phir se wahi puraani umeed ke subko INSHA'ALLAH pasand aayegi
wahi puraana ChiragH wahi puraani ibtida lekin INSHA'ALLAH
ghazal mein aap subko kuch naya parhne ko milega is dafa mene
eik naye andaaz me likhne ki koshish ki hai
Jo bhulaye zikr tera wo khushi nahin chahiyejo shumar ho ghibat me wo hansi nahin chahiyeho jis mein mujh se tere hukm ki nafarmaaniya RAB ChiragH ko waisi zindagi nahin chahiyekar sake gumraah mujhe koi deen e MOHAMMADI semujhe is qism ki aye KHUDA saadgi nahin chahiyekar sake mujh se naraz mere pyaare KHUDA komujhe qaabil e gustaakh deed hi nahin chahiyeishq hai mujhe Rasool a.s se per jahil nahin meae RAB tere siwa kisi ki bandagi nahin chahiyetu awwal tu aakhir tu raheem kareem tu aadil totere siwa kisi ki mujhe mohtaji bhi nahin chahiye***S_ChiragH***
Bohot bohot shukria pasand karne ka bhaiwalaikum salam
ma sha Allah bht pyari dua hy bhai
Allah apke haq me aur mere aur tamam momino ke haq me isi qabool farmae ameen
bhai ishq hai mujhe rasool se me aap ishq hatake mohabbar rak di jie
rasool se mohabbat ho sakti hy ishq nahi shukria
ny bolte bhaiBohot bohot shukria pasand karne ka bhai
JAZAKALLAH khair
lekin ishq kyun nahin ho sakta ??
ishq ka tarjuma sirf wo nahin hota jo larka larki hi karen bhai
ishq mohabbat ko bhi bolte hain : )