It's okay bro. Bht sey asha'ar aisi halat main paaye jatey hai. K decide krna mushkil ho jata k kon sa asal hai. Wesey hmarey zehn main taseeh ka bilkul bhi nahi tha. hmari tou aadat hai koi acha shair ya misraa lagey tou usey dehraana... Ab aap ney commas main btaya tou phir hmain pta laga k aap ney ahbaab likha hua hai... hmari bey dehaanian...Acha "ehbab" nahi bal'ke 'gham-khuwar' hae yaha par...
taseeh ky liye shukriya, mein ney aesey hi parrha tha