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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Qasam se yeh na socha ke har dost se wafa paengein
per yeh bhi na socha ke har dost ko bewafa paengein


***Saifali_Chiragh***


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Fasaana e ishq dil me hoti hai dil ko dikhane ke liye
beshaq yeh ehsas nahin labon pe sajaane ke liye

***Saifali_ChiragH***


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Waise jalte to hum faqat shaam ke auqaat me hain ChiragH
per us jalan ki tadap dil ko din bhar bhi jalaae rakhti hai


***S_ChiragH***


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kyun ae mehboob e dil ab hum se shikweh kiya karte ho
tum se ulfat dil ne ki hai to apni nigaahon se dekha kare tumhein

***Saifali_ChiragH***
 

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boht khoob..

Fasaana e ishq dil me hoti hai dil ko dikhane ke liye
beshaq yeh ehsas nahin labon pe sajaane ke liye

is me pehle misre ki smjh nhi aayi kuch..
 

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hmm nice sharing bro

fasana_e_ishq dil may "hoti" nhi "hota" hay :p

fasana_e_ishq dil may hota hay dil ko dikhane k liye

waise muje lagta hay fasana ki jaga koi aur lafz hota to ziada behtar aur muakammal lagta :)
aapko kia lagta hay bro?
 

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hmm nice sharing bro

fasana_e_ishq dil may "hoti" nhi "hota" hay :p

fasana_e_ishq dil may hota hay dil ko dikhane k liye

waise muje lagta hay fasana ki jaga koi aur lafz hota to ziada behtar aur muakammal lagta :)
aapko kia lagta hay bro?
dard-e-ishq hota to kesa lgta?
 

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dard-e-ishq hota to kesa lgta?
ahan nice

dard_e_ishq dil may hota hay dil ko dikhane k liye
beshaq ye ehsaas nhi labon pe sajane k liye

acha hay

arre ye barri ghair ikhlaqi harkat hay waise
hum dono kisi aur shayer ki shayri ko baghair marzi k remix kar rhi hain :s :p
 

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ahan nice

dard_e_ishq dil may hota hay dil ko dikhane k liye
beshaq ye ehsaas nhi labon pe sajane k liye

acha hay

arre ye barri ghair ikhlaqi harkat hay waise
hum dono kisi aur shayer ki shayri ko baghair marzi k remix kar rhi hain :s :p
han ye to hai:s
khair..is tarha hum b shairy ki alif be sekh jayen to soda ghate ka nhi::p
hai na aapa..{(thinkg)}
 
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Hoorain

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hahaha

haan putri baat to sahi hay
par chiragh bhaya se bhi pooch lo
aur aate hi hamain apne thread se baahir ka rasta na dikha dain :p
 

Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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boht khoob..

Fasaana e ishq dil me hoti hai dil ko dikhane ke liye
beshaq yeh ehsas nahin labon pe sajaane ke liye

is me pehle misre ki smjh nhi aayi kuch..
Shukran fasana story ko kehte hain i think tabhi waise likhe hum

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buhat khoob janab
ShukraaaaaNNNNN mohtaram

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hmm nice sharing bro

fasana_e_ishq dil may "hoti" nhi "hota" hay :p

fasana_e_ishq dil may hota hay dil ko dikhane k liye

waise muje lagta hay fasana ki jaga koi aur lafz hota to ziada behtar aur muakammal lagta :)
aapko kia lagta hay bro?

Hmmmm ur thought is correct also

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ahan nice

dard_e_ishq dil may hota hay dil ko dikhane k liye
beshaq ye ehsaas nhi labon pe sajane k liye

acha hay

arre ye barri ghair ikhlaqi harkat hay waise
hum dono kisi aur shayer ki shayri ko baghair marzi k remix kar rhi hain :s :p
Its ok in friendship ji uar agar changes
achhe hain to more better siso i like it
 

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Waise jalte to hum faqat shaam ke auqaat me hain ChiragH
per us jalan ki tadap dil ko din bhar bhi jalaae rakhti hai

Ahan bahut khoob ji...likhte raho,,ek na ek din to Dagh Dehelvi ban hi jaoge...
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Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh

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Shukria Atif bhai

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Waise jalte to hum faqat shaam ke auqaat me hain ChiragH
per us jalan ki tadap dil ko din bhar bhi jalaae rakhti hai

Ahan bahut khoob ji...likhte raho,,ek na ek din to Dagh Dehelvi ban hi jaoge...
{(yahoo12)}{(yahoo12)}

Bohot bohot shukria siso per dahg dahelvi hai koun?


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hmmm very nice:)
liked the first one
Thank you ji thank you
 

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Shukria Atif bhai

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Bohot bohot shukria siso per dahg dahelvi hai koun?


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Thank you ji thank you
Haaiye Dagh dahalvi Shayeri ki duniya k ek paydaar shayer aur Ghalib uncle k Ustad bhi thy Ghalib ki ghazlon ki islaah karte thy...
Daagh ko dhundho CHiragh lekar Saif bro....{(haha}){(haha})
 
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