us k siwa her chehra, begana sa laga-ADi

[Atif-adi]

us k siwa her chehra, begana sa laga​

us k siwa her chehra, begana sa laga,
us k siwa her shaks, anjana sa laga...​

do mah hi bas un se mil ker hue hain,
hume to ye rishta sadio, purana sa laga...​

jab hal-e-dil kaha dilbar se humne,
unhein ye ADi larka, deewana sa laga...​

her ek bat unki, her ek lafz unka,
hum likhte gae hume, fasana sa laga...​

yun to dastan-dil kuch mukhtasir hai dost,
sunane jab bethe to ek, zamana sa laga...​

us k siwa her chehra, begana sa laga,
us k siwa her shaks, anjana sa laga...​

written by
ADi​

added lines
jal gaya ishq me shamma ki roshni se
wo masoom dil sabko, parwana sa laga...

ye mante hain sab ko jana hai kaber me...
humei bahien unki apna, akhri thikana sa laga​

 

[Hoorain]

yun to dastan-dil kuch mukhtasir hai dost,
sunane jab bethe to ek, zamana sa laga...


hmm nice....

 

[Tariq Saeed]

mmhmm.....

lagta hay toofaan anay vala hay ...

btw nice one

 

[Dawn]

mmhmm.....

lagta hay toofaan anay vala hay ...

btw nice one

hmm mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lagta hai btw nice poetry.adi kia baat hai.2 mah hi hue unse milke par hume to ye ristha sadion purana laga.

 

[St0rm]

WAH ZABARDAST.....

ye aaj kia ho gaya hai apko atif bhai...

 

[Qawareer]

wah ..
boht khoob ADI..
boht hi umdah andaz me likha..
ap ne apne jazbat ko shayri ka rang dy kr likha boht acha lga..
ap k andaz-e-tehreer ki sada or khoobsorat hai..
likhte rhen or humare sath share krte rhe..

 

[Atif-adi]

wah ..
boht khoob ADI..
boht hi umdah andaz me likha..
ap ne apne jazbat ko shayri ka rang dy kr likha boht acha lga..
ap k andaz-e-tehreer ki sada or khoobsorat hai..
likhte rhen or humare sath share krte rhe..

thnx

 

[Zee Leo]

buhat khoob Adi

 

[Amreen]

yun to dastan-dil kuch mukhtasir hai dost,
sunane jab bethe to ek, zamana sa laga...

bohat khoob Atif....

 

[yoursks]

well done Adi

and keep it up

 

[*Sonu*]

nice....​

 

[MSC]

wah umdaaaaaaaaah shayeri....
dil ko chooh gae....

ye mante hain sab ko jana hai kaber me...
humei bahien unki apna, akhri thikana sa laga

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

well done adi

 

[Nelly]

beautiful poetry adi
keep it up​