Best Patriot 2012

[Hoorain]

PF broooooooooooooooooooooooo parre ho jayain ab kitne gandey ho aap ewwwww cheeee yakhhhhh

 

[Prince-Farry]

hahahha ab kia hua apko

aveen

 

[Qawareer]

bass ho jati hain iss umar mai b ghalatiyaan beta g

chaly ap kehti hain tou koshish karray gaye hum k esi ghalati baar baar ho jaye

hum ne to pehle b kaha tha
Aapa se hi kuch sekh len

 

[Prince-Farry]

PF broooooooooooooooooooooooo parre ho jayain ab kitne gandey ho aap ewwwww cheeee yakhhhhh

 

[Aayat]

hum ne to pehle b kaha tha
Aapa se hi kuch sekh len

kiaaaaaa aapa ghalatian krti rehti hain yahan
hahaha nai nai mene nai seekhna kch b

 

[Hoorain]

taubaaaaaaa khichri pak gai,,,chlain is threead se baahir sab contest thread hay ye SOnu aayegi to bohat pitayi lgayegi sabki

 

[Prince-Farry]

bari larki nahi dant ti...{)*}
khair...mai chala ab..Allah Hafiz tc and Fi-Amanillah sisterssssssssssssss[DOUBLEPOST=1344676654][/DOUBLEPOST].............................................

 

[Hoorain]

bari larki nahi dant ti...{)*}
khair...mai chala ab..Allah Hafiz tc and Fi-Amanillah sisterssssssssssssss

inni jaldi
chlain rest karain(hamesha yhi karte hain ) ALLAH hafiz take care

 

[Aayat]

bari larki nahi dant ti...{)*}
khair...mai chala ab..Allah Hafiz tc and Fi-Amanillah sisterssssssssssssss[DOUBLEPOST=1344676654][/DOUBLEPOST].............................................

ALLAH HAFIZ bhaya

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

Mohtarma Chashmish bhi se muraad mere ilawa kis kis ne likhi ??
khair phir bhi u ka shukria @[URL='http://www.tafrehmela.com/members/rubi.43306/']Rubi[/URL]

aur ghazal ko pasand karne ka shukria SUBHAANA sis . . .

 

[Khwahish]

Assalam o ALaikum​

Main aik choti si dedication kar rhi hun!​

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Pakistan Presentation​

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Presentation ka Title hay "KHAWAB_e_IQBAL, UMANG_e_Quaid"​

ye Pakistan ki aik choti se presentation hay prosperity k ibtadayi dor may!​

Board k Left side may Pakistan ki tameer may quaid-e-azam aur Allama Iqbal ko show kiya gya hay ,,Meenar-a-pakistan n faisal mosque ko historcial places may se dikhaya gya hay,,,,, flag k bottom may Quaid_e_azam ka eham paigham Eman,ittehad aur tanzeem jis pe Pakistan Based hay wo show kia gya,,,,Ri8 side may Pakistan ki khushaali ka ibtadayi dor aik plant ki growth k 3 phases se show kiya gya hay,,k kaise aik miracle k tor pe pakistan wajud may aaya aur history books may apna naam bnaya,,,,,aur aik nanhi konpal se Aik green healthy plant bna. Us k bilkul neeche Pakistan k 4 provinces k culture ko show kia gya hay,,,sindhi ho punjabi ho,,Pathan ho ya balochi hon sab aik hain sab Pakistan hain!​

Basically main Theme Yakjehti hay Jab ye culture aik hain aur Quaid k is paigham eman,ittehad,tanzeem ko follow kiya jata rhega Pakistan strong rhega INSHA ALLAH! yhi sab Poem may bhi bayan kiya gya hay,,although Poem may poetry rules follow nhi kar paayi main,, yet i tried to describe the whole idea through that poem!​

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jo Lines neeche likhi hain meenar_e_pakistan may,,, wo pics may clear nhi to main Yahan bhi type karti hun:​

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Dedicated to Pakistan!​

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Aey pak sar-zameen tu shaad rhe​

hay lab pe dua yhi shaam-o-sahar​

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aey arz-e-watan taire khait-o-chaman​

aabad rhain shadab rhain​

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kaise hon bayan jazbaat_e_lagan​

har lehza taire qarz daar hain hum​

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teri hi badolar ye shanakht mili​

aaj dunya may kamyab hain hum​

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sindhi hon ya punjabi,Balochi hon ya sarhadi​

bhoolain na kabhi Pakistan hain hum​

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yun na hongi tabah teri bunyadain​

Sab aik hon to chittan hain hum​

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@Atif-adi
@Humrahi
@Silent Soul
@Aayat
[DOUBLEPOST=1344612446][/DOUBLEPOST]@Nelli
@-Sohail-
@~Bahaar~
@mashraki.larka
@Pari
@yoursks
@Zee Leo
@Asma24
@Detective
@jiya

wowwwww siso mind blowing bole to awesome
tussi to chah gay lovely dedication
mai soch rahi to ki mai be kuch share karo par ab u ki ye work dek kar to mai hairan hogay bohot hi acha hai zabardast aap ki es superb dedication ki samni to mai kuch be dedicate nahe karsakti{(oh0(}
all the best dear for contest{(hi5)}

 

[Hoorain]

wowwwww siso mind blowing bole to awesome
tussi to chah gay lovely dedication
mai soch rahi to ki mai be kuch share karo par ab u ki ye work dek kar to mai hairan hogay bohot hi acha hai zabardast aap ki es superb dedication ki samni to mai kuch be dedicate nahe karsakti{(oh0(}
all the best dear for contest{(hi5)}

awwwww Inni tareeef Thank uu khwahish siso

arre aap bhi zarur dedicate karain,,,,,Contest apni jaga ,,dedications to hum apni khushi se aise hi kar rhe hain ,,ye contest nhi hota tab bhi main 14 august pe dedicate kartne ki koshish karti kuch aap bhi zarur karain muje intazar rhega INSHA ALLAH

 

[Asma24]

Assalamo alaikum TM ALLAH kare humaara mulk sada salamat rahe
aur hum apne is PAK WATAN mein TAWHEED ko phelaayen
aur itna phelaayen ke phir isse baahir jaa kar bhi
hum auron ko DEEN E HAQ ki taraf bula sakein haq per
chalne ka hukm yeh mazhab deta hai tareeqa bhi sikhata hai
jeene ka har raaz batata hai yeh baat subko bata sakein
aur khud bhi is maqsad ko pehchaan sakein Ameen
mene eik ghazal is PAK WATAN ke liye ALHAMDULILLAH
tehreer ki hai INSHA'ALLAH subko pasand aayegi

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My ghazal for our PAKISTAN​

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Bohot hi uljhi huwi theen tab tamam raahein​

Khatir e azaadi buland ho rahi theen aahein​

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soch rahe the eik hi baat MUSALMAAN loug​

kis tarah naara e ISLAM per mulk banaayen​

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mila humein phir eik aisa azeem QUAID​

ke us jaisa ALLAH kare phir se hum paayen​

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koshishein ki aur ki justajoo bohot aur​

karwaaiyn bualnd unhone haq ki sadaayen​

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is kaam per phir sub ko yekjehet kar liya​

ke kese Iqbal ka soch sach kar dikhaayen​

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di theen phir hum ne bohot si qurbaniyan​

aur lagaate rahe hum tawheed ki sadaayen​

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LAILAHAILLALLAH ke maqsad se bana mulk​

so kyun hum is mein ab fasad phelaayen​

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deen e ISLAM ke naam pe liye mulk ko​

kyun ab hum saqafat e kuffaar se mulaayen​

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in sawaalon ko lamha deir bhi soche bina​

hum bhatke bhool kar JINNAH ki wafaayen​

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naa sirf yeh ho ke saal mein eik din bolein​

ho aisa ke rouz hi iske liye jashn manaayen​

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aur jashn aise nahin ke parcham sajaane lagen​

maqsad e WATAN ko phir se khud me jagaayen​

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wasta e tameer buzarg ghar baar chorh aaye​

khatir e takmeel aao jamhuriyat ko thukrayen​

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chorh kar Altaf bhutto shahi o imran ko​

kyun na yahoodiyat se watan ko bachaayen​

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is paar walon se bachaaye RAB PAK humein​

us taraf ke liye to khare hi hain jawaanein​

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tilawat e QURAN se aa gaye mauseeqi per​

kufr ki aati hain MUSLIM ke ghar se sadaayen​

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ki khoob saazish yahoodiyon ne hum per​

milaiyn hinduon se hum ne apni haalatein​

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laa kar PAK WATAN mein valentine o basant​

deen laane wale se ke farman se ki baghawatein​

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KHUDA rehem o karam farmaaye hum per​

sache Quaid ki khouj mein hain nigaahein​

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dua e maghfirat dua e ilm hai khatir e qoum​

kabhi na bhatkein mile humein aisi hidayatein​

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apna kar aaj se hi surat o seerat e MOMIN​

apne is PAK WATAN ke maqsad ko bachaayen​

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kaho Ameen sum Ameen duaaon pe doston​

deta hai ChiragH sub ko is din per mubarakein​

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***S_ChiragH***​

waleikum assalam sum aaameeen for dua wah wah bht umda bht nayab poetry likhi hy chigoo bhiaya ..bas poetry design ki gyi hoti to aur char chand lag jatye ..wese to apki poetry ka jawab nhi ..keep writing good luck[DOUBLEPOST=1344703050][/DOUBLEPOST]

Assalam o ALaikum​

Main aik choti si dedication kar rhi hun!​

​

​

​

​

​

Pakistan Presentation​

​

​

Presentation ka Title hay "KHAWAB_e_IQBAL, UMANG_e_Quaid"​

ye Pakistan ki aik choti se presentation hay prosperity k ibtadayi dor may!​

Board k Left side may Pakistan ki tameer may quaid-e-azam aur Allama Iqbal ko show kiya gya hay ,,Meenar-a-pakistan n faisal mosque ko historcial places may se dikhaya gya hay,,,,, flag k bottom may Quaid_e_azam ka eham paigham Eman,ittehad aur tanzeem jis pe Pakistan Based hay wo show kia gya,,,,Ri8 side may Pakistan ki khushaali ka ibtadayi dor aik plant ki growth k 3 phases se show kiya gya hay,,k kaise aik miracle k tor pe pakistan wajud may aaya aur history books may apna naam bnaya,,,,,aur aik nanhi konpal se Aik green healthy plant bna. Us k bilkul neeche Pakistan k 4 provinces k culture ko show kia gya hay,,,sindhi ho punjabi ho,,Pathan ho ya balochi hon sab aik hain sab Pakistan hain!​

Basically main Theme Yakjehti hay Jab ye culture aik hain aur Quaid k is paigham eman,ittehad,tanzeem ko follow kiya jata rhega Pakistan strong rhega INSHA ALLAH! yhi sab Poem may bhi bayan kiya gya hay,,although Poem may poetry rules follow nhi kar paayi main,, yet i tried to describe the whole idea through that poem!​

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jo Lines neeche likhi hain meenar_e_pakistan may,,, wo pics may clear nhi to main Yahan bhi type karti hun:​

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Dedicated to Pakistan!​

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Aey pak sar-zameen tu shaad rhe​

hay lab pe dua yhi shaam-o-sahar​

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aey arz-e-watan taire khait-o-chaman​

aabad rhain shadab rhain​

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kaise hon bayan jazbaat_e_lagan​

har lehza taire qarz daar hain hum​

​

teri hi badolar ye shanakht mili​

aaj dunya may kamyab hain hum​

​

sindhi hon ya punjabi,Balochi hon ya sarhadi​

bhoolain na kabhi Pakistan hain hum​

​

yun na hongi tabah teri bunyadain​

Sab aik hon to chittan hain hum​

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@Atif-adi
@Humrahi
@Silent Soul
@Aayat
[DOUBLEPOST=1344612446][/DOUBLEPOST]@Nelli
@-Sohail-
@~Bahaar~
@mashraki.larka
@Pari
@yoursks
@Zee Leo
@Asma24
@Detective
@jiya

such a great and creative work with beuatifull beautifull wordss and message ..hoorain sisoo keep it up dear all the very best
@hoorain

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

waleikum assalam sum aaameeen for dua wah wah bht umda bht nayab poetry likhi hy chigoo bhiaya ..bas poetry design ki gyi hoti to aur char chand lag jatye ..wese to apki poetry ka jawab nhi ..keep writing good luck[DOUBLEPOST=1344703050]Aaj kal designing waale dost loug masroof hain
aur mein khud design naa hi karun to behetter hai

pasand karne ka bohot bohot shukria Aasho baji

Masha'ALLAH chaar chaand to aapke ghazal ko sarahte hi ghazal ko lag gaye

 

[MAQSURAH]

Wa alaikum-u-slaam.

A very nice Competition n participations are great as well !

Bless You Pakistan :"{}pak !

 

[Hoorain]

waleikum assalam sum aaameeen for dua wah wah bht umda bht nayab poetry likhi hy chigoo bhiaya ..bas poetry design ki gyi hoti to aur char chand lag jatye ..wese to apki poetry ka jawab nhi ..keep writing good luck[DOUBLEPOST=1344703050][/DOUBLEPOST]
such a great and creative work with beuatifull beautifull wordss and message ..hoorain sisoo keep it up dear all the very best
@hoorain

thanxxxx for liking asma sis

 

[Khwahish]

awwwww Inni tareeef Thank uu khwahish siso

arre aap bhi zarur dedicate karain,,,,,Contest apni jaga ,,dedications to hum apni khushi se aise hi kar rhe hain ,,ye contest nhi hota tab bhi main 14 august pe dedicate kartne ki koshish karti kuch aap bhi zarur karain muje intazar rhega INSHA ALLAH

time to kam rehgaya hai but inshallah i will try dear

 

[Asma24]

yup sach a great contest sona all the best every one[DOUBLEPOST=1344755884][/DOUBLEPOST]chigoo bhiaya es me apka rply kahan hy
@S_ChiragH

 

[Jiya.]

Assalamo alaikum TM ALLAH kare humaara mulk sada salamat rahe​

aur hum apne is PAK WATAN mein TAWHEED ko phelaayen​

aur itna phelaayen ke phir isse baahir jaa kar bhi​

hum auron ko DEEN E HAQ ki taraf bula sakein haq per​

chalne ka hukm yeh mazhab deta hai tareeqa bhi sikhata hai​

jeene ka har raaz batata hai yeh baat subko bata sakein​

aur khud bhi is maqsad ko pehchaan sakein Ameen​

mene eik ghazal is PAK WATAN ke liye ALHAMDULILLAH​

tehreer ki hai INSHA'ALLAH subko pasand aayegi​

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My ghazal for our PAKISTAN​

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​

​

Bohot hi uljhi huwi theen tab tamam raahein​

Khatir e azaadi buland ho rahi theen aahein​

​

soch rahe the eik hi baat MUSALMAAN loug​

kis tarah naara e ISLAM per mulk banaayen​

​

mila humein phir eik aisa azeem QUAID​

ke us jaisa ALLAH kare phir se hum paayen​

​

koshishein ki aur ki justajoo bohot aur​

karwaaiyn bualnd unhone haq ki sadaayen​

​

is kaam per phir sub ko yekjehet kar liya​

ke kese Iqbal ka soch sach kar dikhaayen​

​

di theen phir hum ne bohot si qurbaniyan​

aur lagaate rahe hum tawheed ki sadaayen​

​

LAILAHAILLALLAH ke maqsad se bana mulk​

so kyun hum is mein ab fasad phelaayen​

​

deen e ISLAM ke naam pe liye mulk ko​

kyun ab hum saqafat e kuffaar se mulaayen​

​

in sawaalon ko lamha deir bhi soche bina​

hum bhatke bhool kar JINNAH ki wafaayen​

​

naa sirf yeh ho ke saal mein eik din bolein​

ho aisa ke rouz hi iske liye jashn manaayen​

​

aur jashn aise nahin ke parcham sajaane lagen​

maqsad e WATAN ko phir se khud me jagaayen​

​

wasta e tameer buzarg ghar baar chorh aaye​

khatir e takmeel aao jamhuriyat ko thukrayen​

​

chorh kar Altaf bhutto shahi o imran ko​

kyun na yahoodiyat se watan ko bachaayen​

​

is paar walon se bachaaye RAB PAK humein​

us taraf ke liye to khare hi hain jawaanein​

​

tilawat e QURAN se aa gaye mauseeqi per​

kufr ki aati hain MUSLIM ke ghar se sadaayen​

​

ki khoob saazish yahoodiyon ne hum per​

milaiyn hinduon se hum ne apni haalatein​

​

laa kar PAK WATAN mein valentine o basant​

deen laane wale se ke farman se ki baghawatein​

​

KHUDA rehem o karam farmaaye hum per​

sache Quaid ki khouj mein hain nigaahein​

​

dua e maghfirat dua e ilm hai khatir e qoum​

kabhi na bhatkein mile humein aisi hidayatein​

​

apna kar aaj se hi surat o seerat e MOMIN​

apne is PAK WATAN ke maqsad ko bachaayen​

​

kaho Ameen sum Ameen duaaon pe doston​

deta hai ChiragH sub ko is din per mubarakein​

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***S_ChiragH***​

MashaAllah chiragh bro ​

bht hi umdah ghazal likhi hy ap ny ​

keep it up​

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nd Best of luck​

 

[Sara Cilli Milli]

wah @hoorain bohat khooob poetry zabradast hy