Best Patriot 2012

[Rubi]

Mohtarma Chashmish bhi se muraad mere ilawa kis kis ne likhi ??
khair phir bhi u ka shukria @[URL='http://www.tafrehmela.com/members/rubi.43306/']Rubi[/URL]

aur ghazal ko pasand karne ka shukria SUBHAANA sis . . .

 

[*Sonu*]

awwwwwww thanx sonu

hoor sis ya thnx ap na bola hai
kahi apka ID fir sa hack tu nahi hogya

 

[Jiya.]

@hoorain​

wowwwwwwwwwwww fantasticccccccccccccccccccc work hooooooooooooooooor sis ​

beautiful bht acha present kya hy ​

dekh kr bht acha lga :x :x :x​

keep it up nd Best of luck ​

 

[Hoorain]

hoor sis ya thnx ap na bola hai
kahi apka ID fir sa hack tu nahi hogya

hahah hawww
q kia hua sonu pehle main aur tara thanx bolti hun? [DOUBLEPOST=1344783154][/DOUBLEPOST]

@hoorain​

wowwwwwwwwwwww fantasticccccccccccccccccccc work hooooooooooooooooor sis ​

beautiful bht acha present kya hy ​

dekh kr bht acha lga :x :x :x​

keep it up nd Best of luck ​

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx Jiya chirya

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

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yup sach a great contest sona all the best every one[DOUBLEPOST=1344755884][/DOUBLEPOST]
chigoo bhiaya es me apka rply kahan hy
@S_ChiragH

Ghayab ho gaiy hai kya

yeh koi bhooka mera post kha gaya

khair abhi short mein aap ko thanks keh deta hoon

THANKS for liking the ghazal Aasho baji

us waqt achha khaasa lamba sa reply tha [DOUBLEPOST=1344783614][/DOUBLEPOST]

MashaAllah chiragh bro ​

bht hi umdah ghazal likhi hy ap ny ​

keep it up​

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nd Best of luck​

Shukria shukria Jiya sis

aap ki sharing kab aayegi ??

@Jiya.

 

[Asma24]

hmm chlen jo main baat thi wo to sun li ne humne chigooo bhiaya its my pleasure

 

[MSC]

Assalam o ALaikum​

Main aik choti si dedication kar rhi hun!​

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Pakistan Presentation​

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Presentation ka Title hay "KHAWAB_e_IQBAL, UMANG_e_Quaid"​

ye Pakistan ki aik choti se presentation hay prosperity k ibtadayi dor may!​

Board k Left side may Pakistan ki tameer may quaid-e-azam aur Allama Iqbal ko show kiya gya hay ,,Meenar-a-pakistan n faisal mosque ko historcial places may se dikhaya gya hay,,,,, flag k bottom may Quaid_e_azam ka eham paigham Eman,ittehad aur tanzeem jis pe Pakistan Based hay wo show kia gya,,,,Ri8 side may Pakistan ki khushaali ka ibtadayi dor aik plant ki growth k 3 phases se show kiya gya hay,,k kaise aik miracle k tor pe pakistan wajud may aaya aur history books may apna naam bnaya,,,,,aur aik nanhi konpal se Aik green healthy plant bna. Us k bilkul neeche Pakistan k 4 provinces k culture ko show kia gya hay,,,sindhi ho punjabi ho,,Pathan ho ya balochi hon sab aik hain sab Pakistan hain!​

Basically main Theme Yakjehti hay Jab ye culture aik hain aur Quaid k is paigham eman,ittehad,tanzeem ko follow kiya jata rhega Pakistan strong rhega INSHA ALLAH! yhi sab Poem may bhi bayan kiya gya hay,,although Poem may poetry rules follow nhi kar paayi main,, yet i tried to describe the whole idea through that poem!​

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jo Lines neeche likhi hain meenar_e_pakistan may,,, wo pics may clear nhi to main Yahan bhi type karti hun:​

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Dedicated to Pakistan!​

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Aey pak sar-zameen tu shaad rhe​

hay lab pe dua yhi shaam-o-sahar​

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aey arz-e-watan taire khait-o-chaman​

aabad rhain shadab rhain​

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kaise hon bayan jazbaat_e_lagan​

har lehza taire qarz daar hain hum​

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teri hi badolar ye shanakht mili​

aaj dunya may kamyab hain hum​

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sindhi hon ya punjabi,Balochi hon ya sarhadi​

bhoolain na kabhi Pakistan hain hum​

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yun na hongi tabah teri bunyadain​

Sab aik hon to chittan hain hum​

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@Atif-adi
@Humrahi
@raat ki rani
@Aayat
[DOUBLEPOST=1344612446][/DOUBLEPOST]@Nelli
@-Sohail-
@~Bahaar~
@mashraki.larka
@Pari
@yoursks
@Zee Leo
@Asma24
@Detective
@jiya

walaikum salam
Laaaaaaaaaaaaa jawabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
Weldone hoor masi.....
Appriciated ur effortz babwi
Stay blessed

 

[Hoorain]

walaikum salam
Laaaaaaaaaaaaa jawabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
Weldone hoor masi.....
Appriciated ur effortz babwi
Stay blessed

Thank uuu kukri

 

[*Sonu*]

hahah hawww
q kia hua sonu pehle main aur tara thanx bolti hun? [DOUBLEPOST=1344783154][/DOUBLEPOST]

hoor sis app na ya smiley use kra ha jo ka apko pasand nhi

 

[Khwahish]

ye rahi meri dedication hope sab ko passand ay​

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[Hoorain]

hoor sis app na ya smiley use kra ha jo ka apko pasand nhi

hain sonu siso maine kab kaha tha k muje ye smily nhi pasand [DOUBLEPOST=1344846788][/DOUBLEPOST]

ye rahi meri dedication hope sab ko passand ay​

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waalaikum assalam
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww BEautifullllll dedication khwahish
Really nice
jeeti rho

 

[Khwahish]

thank u dear

 

[*Sonu*]

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ye rahi meri dedication hope sab ko passand ay​

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walikum salam​

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wow khwahish u hav done a gr8 job​

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really loved it bht hi sweet dedication hai​

:x​

love ya​

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best of luck​

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hain sonu siso maine kab kaha tha k muje ye smily nhi pasand

app na kaha tha BP waly thread mai

 

[Sabah]

Wow MashAllah, itna beautiful dedication aur poem aapka he hosakte hain,
once I was asked by ghoost in member's choice thread, k tm k perveen shakir kaun hain so I named you It means I was right.
Kafi hard work kiya aap ne Hoorain sister seriously it's more than a beautiful sharing.
and amee at dua's of your poetry,

Assalam o ALaikum​

Main aik choti si dedication kar rhi hun!​

​

​

​

​

​

Pakistan Presentation​

​

​

Presentation ka Title hay "KHAWAB_e_IQBAL, UMANG_e_Quaid"​

ye Pakistan ki aik choti se presentation hay prosperity k ibtadayi dor may!​

Board k Left side may Pakistan ki tameer may quaid-e-azam aur Allama Iqbal ko show kiya gya hay ,,Meenar-a-pakistan n faisal mosque ko historcial places may se dikhaya gya hay,,,,, flag k bottom may Quaid_e_azam ka eham paigham Eman,ittehad aur tanzeem jis pe Pakistan Based hay wo show kia gya,,,,Ri8 side may Pakistan ki khushaali ka ibtadayi dor aik plant ki growth k 3 phases se show kiya gya hay,,k kaise aik miracle k tor pe pakistan wajud may aaya aur history books may apna naam bnaya,,,,,aur aik nanhi konpal se Aik green healthy plant bna. Us k bilkul neeche Pakistan k 4 provinces k culture ko show kia gya hay,,,sindhi ho punjabi ho,,Pathan ho ya balochi hon sab aik hain sab Pakistan hain!​

Basically main Theme Yakjehti hay Jab ye culture aik hain aur Quaid k is paigham eman,ittehad,tanzeem ko follow kiya jata rhega Pakistan strong rhega INSHA ALLAH! yhi sab Poem may bhi bayan kiya gya hay,,although Poem may poetry rules follow nhi kar paayi main,, yet i tried to describe the whole idea through that poem!​

​

​

jo Lines neeche likhi hain meenar_e_pakistan may,,, wo pics may clear nhi to main Yahan bhi type karti hun:​

​

​

Dedicated to Pakistan!​

​

Aey pak sar-zameen tu shaad rhe​

hay lab pe dua yhi shaam-o-sahar​

​

aey arz-e-watan taire khait-o-chaman​

aabad rhain shadab rhain​

​

kaise hon bayan jazbaat_e_lagan​

har lehza taire qarz daar hain hum​

​

teri hi badolar ye shanakht mili​

aaj dunya may kamyab hain hum​

​

sindhi hon ya punjabi,Balochi hon ya sarhadi​

bhoolain na kabhi Pakistan hain hum​

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yun na hongi tabah teri bunyadain​

Sab aik hon to chittan hain hum​

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@Atif-adi
@Humrahi
@raat ki rani
@Aayat
[DOUBLEPOST=1344612446][/DOUBLEPOST]@Nelli
@-Sohail-
@~Bahaar~
@mashraki.larka
@Pari
@yoursks
@Zee Leo
@Asma24
@Detective
@jiya

 

[NXXXS]

hmmmm........................

 

[Khwahish]

@ sparkofighter
thank u sweetheart :x

 

[MSC]

Thank uuu kukri

ur pleasure[DOUBLEPOST=1344863029][/DOUBLEPOST]

ye rahi meri dedication hope sab ko passand ay​

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Walaikum salam
beautiful Dedication
Good luck

 

[Jiya.]

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Ghayab ho gaiy hai kya

yeh koi bhooka mera post kha gaya

khair abhi short mein aap ko thanks keh deta hoon

THANKS for liking the ghazal Aasho baji

us waqt achha khaasa lamba sa reply tha [DOUBLEPOST=1344783614][/DOUBLEPOST]

Shukria shukria Jiya sis

aap ki sharing kab aayegi ??

@Jiya.

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ur welcome ​

hmm shayd na bi aye ​

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ye rahi meri dedication hope sab ko passand ay​

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aww so sweet dedication khwahish
keep it up
nd Best of luck [DOUBLEPOST=1344866330][/DOUBLEPOST]

hahah hawww
q kia hua sonu pehle main aur tara thanx bolti hun? [DOUBLEPOST=1344783154][/DOUBLEPOST]
Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx Jiya chirya

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my pleasure ​

 

[Hoorain]

thank u dear

my pleasure [DOUBLEPOST=1344868259][/DOUBLEPOST]

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walikum salam​

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wow khwahish u hav done a gr8 job​

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really loved it bht hi sweet dedication hai​

:x​

love ya​

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best of luck​

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app na kaha tha BP waly thread mai

meko q nhi yaad aaying
meki yaadasht to kamzor nhi ho gai? mamaaaa [DOUBLEPOST=1344868477][/DOUBLEPOST]

Wow MashAllah, itna beautiful dedication aur poem aapka he hosakte hain,
once I was asked by ghoost in member's choice thread, k tm k perveen shakir kaun hain so I named you It means I was right.
Kafi hard work kiya aap ne Hoorain sister seriously it's more than a beautiful sharing.
and amee at dua's of your poetry,

awww thank u soo much ,,ziada hi tareef kar di aap ne
ahan parvin shakir thanx for the compliment ,,,but truely speaking i m not so gud in poetry writing even i dont know exact Rules of poetry writing,,neither i could follow any rule in this piece of poetry
Thanx for liking n words of encouragement ,,really means a lot for me
STAY BLESSED![DOUBLEPOST=1344868557][/DOUBLEPOST]

ur pleasure[DOUBLEPOST=1344863029]
hahaha
,i can share it wid u if u want

 

[Ghazal_Ka_Chiragh]

ye rahi meri dedication hope sab ko passand ay​

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Wa'alaikum assalaam
Masha'ALLAH behadd aala banaaya hai
aur dekhne se hi lag raha hai ke isme bohot waqt laga hoga
ALLAH kare aap ki mehnat rang laaye ameen . . .